Friday, 6 July 2018

Playscripts


In Literacy we are learning about Play scripts. We would like you to create a play script between two commentators during a football match.

e.g.

Dave: Trippier takes the ball; he is running into the box (getting faster as he speaks).

Phil: Referee has seen a foal and given a penalty. Penalty for England! (Shouting and throwing his hands into the air at the speed of light).


12 comments:


  1. Dave:tripper takes the ball and he is running into the box
    Phil:referee has seen a foal and has given penalty for England
    Dave:He runs,kicks the ball and scores
    Phil:The score 1-0
    Dave:Tripper has got the ball again and oh he has scored AGAIN
    Phil:The score is 2-0
    Dave:It is he end of the match and it is the first time England have won a FIFA WORLD CUP.

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  2. Commentators: Dylan and Myles:

    Myles: Kane takes the ball, is he going to score??
    Dylan: YESSSSSSSS! There’s a goal for ENGLAND!!!
    (They throw their hands everywhere and start dancing!)
    Myles: Oh oh, is this going to be a fight??? No and the referee gives a red card to Ronaldo!
    Dylan: Ali takes the ball and passes it to Lingard!
    Both: AND THAT’S ANOTHER GOAL FOR ENGLAND!!!!
    (They scream and run everywhere, Myles smashes the window and Dylan jumps out! She lands on Harry Kane’s back and Myles wrecks the desk. They call the ambulance, he is most likely dead.)
    Dylan died and broke Harry Kane and Dele Alli and Jesse Lingard’s back. Myles died as well and the whole England team has broken their back and legs and feet.

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  3. Martin Tyler: This is Martin Tyler and Alan Smith at half time, it is still nil nil.
    Alan: Belgium starting given to Eden Hazard back to Lukaku.
    Martin: Intercepted by Dier. It wasn't much of an interception but a poor pass.
    Alan: Tackled by Aldiweirald. Passed to Felanni. He runs down the pitch to Hazard crossed over.
    Martin: ROMELU LUKAKU!!!( SCREAMING). (Calms down) I expected him to be wheeling away in celebration.
    Alan:It was a fine save by Jordan Pickford. Corner kick. Cleared by Tripper and to Jesse Lingard.
    Martin. He makes a run into the box crossed to Dele Alli.
    Alan: What a fine header into the back of the net!(screaming). Alli was no match for Courtois.
    Martin: It is now one nil to England.

    By Hamza

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  4. Scene 1: In the stadium
    Sam: This looks like a amazing game.
    Mat: I agree
    Sam: look, neymar is going to score
    Mat: GOAL, one to Brazil
    Sam: hurray (Happily)

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  5. Jimmy: The players are coming on the pitch

    Timmy: Ronaldo does the kick off and sprints straight to the box passing it to Kroos

    Jimmy: And he rabonas it into the goal[speaks faster and faster]

    Timmy: ooh what a goal mate[shouts]

    Jimmy: OK new kick off to Barcelona

    Timmy: Neymar has the ball and he is controlling it

    Jimmy: Ooh Ronaldo slide tackled him but it's referees choice

    Timmy: And the referee says no fowl

    Jimmy: The referee blows the whistle and its full time

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  6. Sports commentator 1: Michael has done better this year. (With an eye on the clock)
    Commentator 2: yes, especially in this game. He's somebody to watch in 4 years time.
    1: There is only 10 minutes left. The other team had better hurry up. ( he raises his voice)
    2: Otherwise it is 1-0 to Denmark. Man United will want to buy him back. (Drinking his coffee)
    1: The match is nearly over. I think Denmark is winning !
    2: There goes the whistle! Denmark has won the match... (They smile)

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  7. Riccardo Bhinder11 July 2018 at 09:39

    Scene 1: A giant pitch with tons of fans screaming

    Teams: England v Croatia

    Dave: Roonie passes to sturrige

    Bill: sturrige to Ronnie (speaking faster as he goes)

    Dave:Ronnie shoots (scrams) what a goal

    Bill:England in the the lead with a wonderful goal

    Dave:I think England might win

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  8. Brazil vs Japan

    Tyler:Its been half time and now lets start the match.

    Gray:Brazil starts with the ball.

    Tyler:Neymar strikes and dribbles the ball forward.

    Gray:Getting closer to the box . . . .closer . . . . .closer and OOOOOOÃ’OOOOOOOOOHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH neymar scores an amazing goal .

    Tyler: I got to be honest that neymar's goal was an astonishing goal that I have never seen!

    Tyler:Japan is embarrassed by neymar's goal

    Gray:Masaaki Higashiguchi kicks the ball to Keisuke Honda and he passes it to Shinji Okazaki and there he scores a powerful shot. Japan is delighted that they have scored. It is 1:1. What is going to happen next?

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  9. julius caeser: welcome to r.i.p news channel

    mark antony :Yorker has all that power . wooo (cheering)

    juilius caeser: ( looking awe-inspired)what an amazing save by jordan pickford

    (pickford saves a goal produced by a dashing form of croatia's Andrej Kramaric)

    boodica : (enters platform)ratford had missed the goal................ why oh why?

    (two members on the pitch fight)

    mark antony: Referee has seen a foal and given a penalty. Penalty for croatia.

    (referree gives red card to croatia)

    tutunkamun:yeeeh (shouting and throwing his hand in the air

    (the time had run out )

    brutus:no . the time has ran out and it is 1-1 and it is penalty shoot out

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  10. Mark: Vida tries to shoot and tries to score a goal for Croatia and OH but Pickford saves it .Right there Tom could've been a goal for Croatia.
    Tom:I know I know Mark hu um such a sad time for Croatia fans.
    Mark:Yep and oh the referee is giving a yellow card to someone but err don't know who it is yet and umm a free kick for England.(acting surprised)
    Tom:Tripiet takes the sot and OH YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS Tripier just scored a goal for England and um Mark football is really coming home.(smile on face hugging Mark)
    Mark:Yep and such a proud day for us England fans today(PROUD AND HAPPY).

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  11. Football comantator:Messi with the pass rackitich scores screaming comantator 2:I agree with you sam that was an amazing goal. COMANTATOR :OMG BARCELONA WINS TEN TO ZERO WHAT AN AMAZING MATCH GOOD NIGHT POEPLE SEE YOU NEXT TIME!!!!! messi:this was an live experians so thank you evry one and bye!!

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  12. England Vs Coratia final time :

    Commenatator 1 : lets get ready everything check soo lets go

    (staying right postiton ready to save,england fans waiting penitly)

    commentator 2; herr it goes and what a goal englan 1 nil to england.
    (england fans scream fans go wild )

    Commentator 2: ooh fans in crotia really didn't see that coming did they

    commentator1: No they didn't see that coming

    commentator 2: only a few amount of time is left and score all ready is 2-1

    Commentator 1; i think crotia is going to bring back the final cup because today night was rough and hard night i have to say

    commentator 2: it was but that goal i did't see that coming did you

    commentator 1 : no i really didn't ii tougt england really played well but it was hard and england this time just this time have got beaten.

    thats all we have fo today good night and hve happy evening .

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Playscripts

In Literacy we are learning about Play scripts. We would like you to create a play script between two commentators during a football mat...